Friday, January 18, 2019

stephen but edgier

In chapter 2, we are introduced to a transformed Stephen who broods, is purposefully detaches, reads scandalous and heretical poetry, and is obsessed with the idea of Mercedes. Stephen believes that if he wanders the streets enough he'll run into a girl that will transform him. This transformation as a result of meeting a woman would be a kind of "coming of age" for Stephen. And indeed, chapter 2 does end with Stephen encountering a woman, but Joyce frames the encounter in an ironic way that punctures Stephen's character. Actually, many of Stephen's transformation in this chapter feel hollow.

First off, Stephen sleeps with a prostitute which degrades the encounter. Sure, the prostitute might be showing a little interest in Stephen but the encounter itself was transactional in nature. Stephen doesn't mention any of the transaction (which is probably because the narrative is a reflection of Stephen's consciousness) but I think it's safe to assume that he pays the prostitute. The mere fact that the encounter was a transaction cheapens Stephen's actions. Stephen doesn't transform because of his own merit or work but instead pays money in order to have a transformative encounter. As a result, Stephen's "transformation" as a result of his encounter with the prostitute feels a little artificial. The prostitute isn't truly interested in Stephen (aside from his money) and Stephen has no emotional attachment to the prostitute. So although, Stephen narrates the encounter as if it was particularly emotional for him, the scene feels hollow because the reader knows there's no real connection between the prostitute and Stephen.

My second point pertains to the majority of Stephen's actions in chapter two, not just his encounter with the prostitute. A lot of Stephen's changes and actions in this chapter seem to stem from the reading he has done. Stephen feels like he resembles the main character in The Count of Monte Cristo and views Lord Byron as a role model of sorts. Which is all well and good, but sometimes I feel like Stephen tries to hard to be like his romantic heroes. Sometimes, it feels as if Stephen isn't trying to be his own person but Lord Byron 2.0. The poem he writes is in a similar style to that of Lord Byron's. He refers to Emma as E C, just like Lord Byron does. Stephen has sketchy encounters with women just as Lord Bryon does. As a result, Stephen's transformation is undermined and becomes a little more artificial. Stephen isn't transforming into his own person and developing his own views but merely imitating someone else.

I don't want to attack tween Stephen too hard though since most people go through a stage similarly to Stephen (or at least I did). Stephen does grow. He learns to question authority figures like when he talked to the Rector about the prefect's behavior. I think we all go through a stage like Stephen does where we imitate someone we admire. I think imitation is also an important phase too. For instance, the first poem we see Stephen write feels heavily based off an Lord Byron's poetry (Stephen calls Emma EC because that's what Lord Byron does) but this is one of the first poems Stephen writes and its still an important part of his development as an artist. It still gets the ball rolling.

As a result, although Stephen thinks of himself as an old soul who is more mature than the other children his age and his parent's, readers don't necessarily share this sentiment.

4 comments:

  1. We critic Stephen harshly because we have the better perspective. We have time to analyze the deeper significance of his actions while he's in the heat of the moment. I'm pretty sure we all have moments in our lives we'd rather store away in the dark, but everything Stephen does is laid out for us to stab at -- even the hollow moments.
    Like you said, imitation is an important phase. This novel is about us growing with Stephen: some of it will include him trying to find himself as a character (may it be the Byron or the Count). I, rather than share the sentiment of his attitude, cringe at Stephen because he reflects some of our own unconscious thoughts. So, I have to rebut the idea he doesn't transform. I think he does, but not in the direction we'd like him to.

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  2. First of all, I really like the title of your blog lol. I do feel that on his journey to figure out who he is as a person, Stephen is going through a phase where he's definitely imitating a lot of the characters he reads about and also Byron. He has a vivid imagination and he tends to channel his imaginations into his reality. The problem is his imaginations don't go as planned in reality, which causes him to do some pretty cringy things.

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  3. I like your observation that Stephen's worldview and personality is mainly based on copying people he admires. His encounter with the prostitute is a very extreme form of that of course, but I agree that he is just following what he thinks he needs to do to become a man, or even a romantic hero. I think it's sad that he thinks he needs to copy people to have the kind of life he wants, and he is reaching out for a romantic hero's life at a very young age. I hope he figures out that copying is a good way to start to learn, but he needs to think for himself at some point.

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  4. I agree with your argument that Stephen's transformations are very surface-level. He seems to be projecting what he thinks is crucial to being an adult: "being" a poet, instead of becoming one. Although, I do want to cut him some slack since we as humans learn by imitation and examples, and at a young age he turned to Lord Byron when his interests of love and literature started developing, much like we might have done with movies or novels we grew up with.

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